Poem # 15
October 29, 2008
ashleymandesmrjp
Part 1
Wondering around
trying to find the right place for me
finally the right place for me
but now
an even harder task
the right thing for me
my career outcome all waited on this
part 2
Realization
oh realization
how good it feels
to know what you could do
for the rest of your life
selfless
helpfull
realization
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1. katelynsedlocksdcp | October 30, 2008 at 1:57 am
I think that your poem is done very well. I liked how you broke them up, but had the same energy in both of them. The type of poem you used is also very appropiate for this because it helps put your feelings in a simple way for everyone to understand.
Good job
= )